Thank you for the draft submission. Please write in the third person or passive voice remove the word my.
Can you offer references to support your points in the introduction? You could identify the concerns voiced by the academic community, educators, the government ad parents offering a range of references to support your points. This should include journal material but could also include reports, government statements etc.
Try to ensure you offer references to support your work; unreferenced work presents as a personal opinion and has limited academic value. I have provided some examples where this should occur on p. 2 of your work. Check this throughout the remainder of the work. Do not indent your paragraphs. Align all work to the left-hand margin. Ensure you use UK spelling.

Task1
You offer an interesting and clear aim; well done. Review your objectives, ensure these are written in clear sentences. For example, objective 2 could become: To identify the perceived effects of censorship on children's learning. Review objective 3, 4 & 5. Do they need to be separate? Could they be covered by a single objective, e.g. What is the purpose of censorship? Review your rationale; this needs to justify why the research is important? for example access to materials that may be inappropriate to a child age and stage development. You would need to include references to support each of these points. Task2
Continue to develop your discussion. Why would you use a mixed-method approach? What are the benefits of this concerning the research? Integrate further reference to support your initial discussion on p. 4 concerning qualitative and quantitative methods. See my comments within the work. Task 3
Integrate further references to support your discussion. Ensure that you evaluate each data collection tool. Explore the advantages and disadvantages of each of the methods in greater depth and reference. At the moment, this section is quite descriptive. Avoid informal language, such as "kid"s. Task 4
Integrate further references into the work. Task 5 Evelop, this section, integrate references. Ensure you explore each aspect of quality identified by SCRIPT systematic, compatible, resilient, insightful, practical, and theoretically grounded.
References Review your reference page, do not indent these. Align with the left-hand margin. Continue to develop your range of references.